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When Left To Dream...You Find Me Crying.

Ramshackled heart, rusted chains of indifference, scars the arms with jagged cuts, lines encased in deep throated laughs, gagging on the insolent indifference. Walk that mile in shoes of lead, weighted down with suffrance, magnetized with fetid truths, masks of righteous lies, and truths that barely scrap the earth. When eyes are opened, the ones sewn shut, and the brightness blinds for moments, the stinging breath of something known, this life is just the dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/13/2016 9:49:00 PM
PAUL, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/9/2010 12:44:00 PM
Quite a philosophical write on the life which just the dream..Paul
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Date: 11/9/2010 11:54:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Paul. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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