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When Its Time To Let Go

Seek not please that fool to stay
To grieve your soul thats light and gay
So short is life and breath and day
So swift a life can fleet away.

So waste not time in love's pursuit
When ceased is love and joy is mute.
Silly a fool don't worth your charms
To bask within your loving arms.

Though hard you try to hide this day
The raging love that has slipped away.
For day to day you've prayed to die
When your heart and your eyes unite to cry.

You've searched the stars for love so true
But all along, its right in front of you.,

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Nandita Das Date: 6/9/2015 9:37:00 PM So glad I read this wonderful poem today. It's awesome. Thank you. 7 Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/14/2013 6:01:00 PM Dear M.M another jewel from your pen its a total wow too love it lots Love Shadow xox Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/19/2013 8:39:00 AM Thank you dear Shadow for that wonderful feedback dear one.

Carrie Richards Date: 6/13/2013 6:46:00 PM Your talent just shines above and beyond most of us here....it is such a pleasure to read your poems! And thank you for your kind comment on mine, which cannot compare....but thank you very much! Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/14/2013 5:47:00 AM It was really a pleasure to read yours also my friend.You're a champ.

Donna Jones Date: 6/12/2013 5:03:00 PM So true...too often we seek something different only to have it fizzle.... Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/12/2013 6:28:00 PM Thank you Donna,its nice to read your wonderful thoughts on this one.

Cherl Dunn Date: 6/12/2013 4:38:00 PM I love the last three stances beautifully done great write bravo. Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/12/2013 6:26:00 PM Thanks Cherl for your honest feedback.Much appreciated.

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 6/12/2013 2:23:00 PM ;) Lovely. Keep writing! Your poetry steeps in emotions. Smiles from Cyndi Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/12/2013 6:21:00 PM Thanks Cyndi for your encouraging comment and you're certainly right about the emotions part.Smiles :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/12/2013 12:18:00 PM yes, and within you as well... a paolo coehlo kind of artistic sway wonderfully quilled... applause, mus..:) huggs Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/12/2013 6:02:00 PM Within you as well,yes certainly dear Nette.Thanks for the applause and the gracious feedback dear poet.Big hugs.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/12/2013 10:59:00 AM so sensual full of passion written at your best. dear M.M I totally love it love Shadow xox Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/12/2013 5:56:00 PM Thank you dear Shadow,glad you could stop by and read this one.Though I know you read this one before xox

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2013 2:02:00 AM - ..... Many happy days to you. - Beautiful poem Mustapha ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/12/2013 5:52:00 PM Thanks for the happy wishes Anne.I'm glad you could stop by with a lovely feedback dear poet. oxox