When It Began

Scene I: When It Began
It is a soft-lit evening, my luscious lips ready, blood…sweat… red,
As I wonder just what can excite this insanely wacko head
Much blissful scenes, sounds and songs entertain these curling toes
Smeared makeup, made up again, green mess of hair that flows
When I hear from the other room, a sound quite like a groan,
A deep voice full of chocolate wonder, like a dog…I follow the bone…
Meandering through the hallway, the sounds become ah- thunderous
Till I reach the slightly open door, my eyes search in wanderlust…

And there he is, sitting upright, like a bloom resisting the wilt of winter,
His eyes glued on sumptuous words of worlds I could only dream to enter
A hood over his sexy head, his voice rises like crazed incense,
Then I realize why this winter cannot dare to stop such resistance
He is gazing upon wondrous words, his eyes in tears, lit with glee
I beg for him to look my way…give some of this stimulation to me...
Slowly….inevitably…I make my way to his side
Gazing where his eyes are glued, anxious to be part of the ride
And what I see changes my life forever…verses for longing touch
The oak tree grows, I’m blooming…I’m salivating so much

I take a seat beside him as he utters sweet ecstasy
Swelling ever more tightly, I grow more desperate at his mercy
He guides me into this realm I have never known as long as I have breathed 
Now as I wallow in these words… they moisten and arouse each sense deceived
My imagination heightens, my provoked senses he discovers,
I’m anxious to explore this realm with him which now he uncovers
Guided swiftly to his masterful breaths and intentioned exhalations
I forget all past endeavors, all pleasure-based revelations
This is all I need now…. I have exactly what I desire
Just let me rise into the skies and take my place dear sire
What is this happiness I do feel, my growth is all but beginning
Enlightening…enlivening…. Writing in painful pleasure…winning

Don’t stop those eyes from meeting with her word
Don’t let the others in with this- who cares if we’re absurd
We are flying like cocks, winning pride from growing wings
Rising voices…raising flocks… never stopping for simple things
We’re beyond happy baby… for that I am certain…
I am ready on the stage…. 
Just waiting for you…
To pull that curtain….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/2/2015 7:18:00 AM
Just want you to know I was looking for you and the latest creations. I know how it is. Sometimes it is there and sometimes it is not. I do wish you well. I also get such a kick that you can describe yourself as wacko! I don't see it that way. I see it as making lots of connections most people are missing. It's really a pleasure for me that you can share them.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:04:00 PM
Was I there this time around Duuuuke? ;) Haha. Im sorry this is so late. My bad -___- Love your reviews as always.~Laura
Date: 7/2/2015 12:33:00 AM
such depth to this , truly enjoyed this one *luv, p.d.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:04:00 PM
Thanks! It was so fun to write! ~Laura
Date: 6/28/2015 11:17:00 AM
How is it that you can take these emotions and readiness for love and turn them into such a story? I can not do what you do, but I can truly enjoy the incite into your beautiful mind. You are such a prize--do you have any idea? I mean that in a positive way. Writing and loving are similar, and you give from your heart to us all. I only hope you have it all. Somehow, I believe that you must. Thank-you for the fun!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:05:00 PM
This one I wrote effortlessly; it kind of just flowed out. Dunno if I'm going to continue with it, maybe.~Laura
Date: 6/26/2015 10:35:00 PM
I am impressed says, Abed
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:06:00 PM
Laura says, why thank you good sir, and sorry for my uber late reply... ~Laura
Date: 6/26/2015 1:40:00 AM
whoa...my friend! Long time...and this is what, full of double entendre and sensuous mind stimulations! To your quill and arrow, my friend I take a bow! hugs!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:06:00 PM
Many thanks, Kim! This is a suuuper late reply, sorry about that. ~Laura
Date: 6/21/2015 9:03:00 PM
Isn't original temptation marvellous, presenting our intellects and desires such rare opportunity that our lives seem to be made for these encounters, built upon these new eyes Laura...I love how you describe the effects of temptation on your judgement, and on your need for achievement, its very sexy...wonderful mystery snd arousing suspense Poetess...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:08:00 PM
Hiah Justin! And thank you for your lovely reviews, always having something wonderful to say. Sorry for the late reply haha~Laura
Date: 6/21/2015 3:37:00 AM
Nice word-erotic piece Laura...I hope there's more to cum!..Peter.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/21/2015 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Peter. Er... dunno about that yet. I'm swamped at the momento , but maybe! And thank you a ton for readin! ~Laura
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