When is a dream not reality?

A setted carving, 
   Written by privation 
      Words that leak through unfilled ink 
         Gawping empty between ridges. 
            Then those canyon cliffs retreat again 
               Back down to their weary plains
            Brothers undo brothers, as
         All plains worn away. 
      And those letters of privation 
   Are gone, as empty were their valley hollows 
Their hollow fame ungained. 

         Vectors collide head into head, their 
      Perpendicular paths to ruin 
   Skidding, crashing, melting, bubbling, 
Paths fuse and fissure, which spitter into nothing. 

In death’s head shell, a poltergeist cackle
   A ghoul of concave echo walls
      It throws flaming cocktails to profuse undo 
         And set alight the beams of memory.

            And knowledge stolid, solid meals, 
         Waste to famine, thoughts
      To hollow dreams, not recollections, 
   What deceit 
Are believed imaginations. 

Set alight those beams 
   And worn down hollows of privation 
      I am left with hollow dreams, 
   Not recollections. What deceit
Are believed imaginations.

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Date: 7/18/2025 5:50:00 AM
Quite a ride you've penned Alice. I don't think we've met. Belated welcome to PS!
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Date: 7/30/2025 5:38:00 AM
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