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When I'M Gone

For the first time My foes will commend me But neither will I be surprised Nor have knowledge Neither will I be shocked Nor feel loved Receiving flowers from my rivals For I will be gone for good I will try to blink, Move my lips to menace My enemies with an abrupt return, But my efforts shall be in vain I will try to rise, Try to give a kiss to my rose, Try to give my last words to loved ones But voice shall be muted Beyond my sight, A thunderstorm of tears, I shall try to turn back, Only to find my body statued They shall weep for loosing someone Whom they loved so much that... They would give an arm for Unfortunately, that someone will be deaf When I'm gone just carry on Don't mourn, rejoice every time You'll hear the sound of my voice, Just know that; I'll be looking down at you Smiling, Look at smiling for the days We enjoyed on earth with Eminem Children will see mommy crying Asking why?why? Why is mommy crying? Saying Mozy don't leave No Mozy, Daddy just stop it! But I won't be trying to harm or hurt you, I will be trying to obey Him So here are my last words Before I'm gone for good I...I...I... I...think I've to go NOW!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/28/2018 4:54:00 AM
I LOVE the ending! LOVE it!
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:23:00 AM
hmmm??? Do you know something we don't know? ;)
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:15:00 AM
Interesting take on seeing death from the 'other side of the coffin.
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Book: Shattered Sighs