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When I Was Young

When I was young, love was everywhere. Songs of love filled the air, from birds singing to radios playing. We danced to our favorite songs, we loved to sing along. Where have all the time and years gone? it truly was only yesterday. Is it the last call for lonely hearts? we say, not for us. Our hearts are forever young, dancing and singing forever to love songs. Date: 11/3/2019 Written 1 Place LAST CALL FOR LONELY HEARTS Contest Judged: 11/13/2019 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/6/2021 7:41:00 PM

Forever young, Paula ~ glad to find this delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2020 7:40:00 PM

for example: < center >Mary had a little Lamb.< / center > except put all the symbols and word together "touching", same as for "b" for bold and "em" for making your letters slant

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2020 7:39:00 PM

Nice poem, Paula. Soup Mail is not allowing me to e-mail you. :

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2020 7:37:00 PM

Hello Paula Sorry, I thought you got my mail. I need you to check your syllable count in your poem. Hugs Eve

Gary Radice

Date: 12/17/2019 1:34:00 PM

A great read. Thank you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2019 9:51:00 PM

I have been away. Thanks for reading & writing. Glad you like it.........

Jenish Somadas

Date: 11/22/2019 6:57:00 AM

Nice one..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/27/2019 7:54:00 PM

Glad you like it. Thank You, for reading & writing your note.....

Funom Makama

Date: 11/15/2019 8:35:00 AM

Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2019 8:40:00 AM

Glad you like it. Thanks for reading and writing to me...........

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 11:59:00 PM

I remember those glorious times. Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your top win, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2019 8:39:00 AM

Great times to remember. It was fun to write. Thank You, for your note. Enjoy your day writing...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2019 7:39:00 PM

So nostalgic. I can really relate to this one, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2019 12:43:00 PM

Thanks for your note & time. Guess age makes us look at things differently......

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/4/2019 4:27:00 PM

Beautiful. Evocative. True.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/5/2019 2:10:00 PM

I hope you get this. I tried to send you about the animal from my Furry poem. It will not send. I am not sure how to get it to you. Help! Should I try to send it here?

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 8:05:00 PM

true, a lot of the oldies are the goodies in my bag. I love all genres of music. x

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/4/2019 5:19:00 PM

Thank You, for your very kind words. I love the Righteous Brothers. "Unchained Melody" is a favorite. They do not make song like they did years ago. This song touches the soul..........

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 4:27:00 PM

Righteous Brothers, "Unchained Melody". Cut and past into link Paula, to listen. Leanne x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 4:27:00 PM

https://youtu.be/qiiyq2xrSI0