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When I Was Eighteen

When I was eighteen I entered her virgin land She absorbed me with esteem But there was no success at hand I struggled to raise my head up To sail above the obstacles To keep the mantle up From the unknown expected miracles Success distanced herself From the vicinity of the humble Food, rest, pleasure I rejected myself Determined and prepared for the rumble The rumble for greatness To stand out among equals To lead a life of happiness When the expedition is over

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Date: 5/27/2019 3:00:00 PM
Fine write Orochi, good penning indeed.
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Orochi C. Joshua
Date: 9/8/2020 6:48:00 AM
Thanks unreservedly, my Noble friend Gordon

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