When I Visited a Seriously Ill Friend At the Hospital

Can you stay with me awhile?
Please don't leave, at least not yet,
There's some things I should tell you
They've been too long left unsaid.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 16, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Jim, this poem reminds me how important it is to tell people how you feel. Too often, the things that go unsaid are words that may have made a relationship stronger. Thanks for sharing. Carolyn
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March 16, 2009 at 12:49 PM
This is a poigniant piece, Jim. You said a lot in these few lines. There are times when some things aren't better left unsaid. Thank you for sharing this and your thoughtful comment! Love, Robin
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