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When I Touched the Driftwood

Whilst walking along the beach close to where I stay Like other beach walkers seeing the washed up display I stumbled across some driftwood buried in the sand The feeling when I touched it I began to understand I knew where it had came from I also knew where it had been It was part of the bow of a ship, a sturdy cross member beam The longer that I held it, it told me more each time When it was shaped from the tree in its scented pristine prime It was taken to a shipbuilder whom crafted it into the hull Being part of a glorious yacht that sailed from the Isle of Mull But on one fateful night in the storm lashed Caribbean The seas were just to strong for it floundered and let the sea in All the crew were saved picked up by various ships Taken to a safe harbour to reminisce about their trip I'm in the West of Scotland, the Caribbean is way down south Amazing how this piece of driftwood, lies at this river mouth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/29/2009 11:30:00 AM
Driftwood tells an amazing story all on it's own, you have a great story here! Love reading your poetry! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/26/2009 5:46:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us James. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2009 12:07:00 PM
It was carried by the tides and currents and a whale or two just for you. The oceans are a mighty moving force which fasinate me but are deadly. I love the feel of wood that has been weathered by the water, sand, and time. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/25/2009 8:51:00 AM
wonderful story,i enjoy reading and knowing more facts through your writes..excellent..and recomment..im not posting Christmas Landia for the contest,i dont think its good enough,Car deserves better poems than that,bt tnks for enjoying the read..tnku alwys for your support my good friend-Charma
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Date: 10/25/2009 8:41:00 AM
What a wonderful story, James! Amazing that you "knew" the history of this driftwood. It is a feat of "psychometry" to know the history of an object by seeing or touching it. And this power plays a major role in my book as the Americans discover the remains of the the Atlantean civilization. I love the way this story unfolds. Awesome writing, dear Highlander! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2009 7:30:00 PM
This poem is magnificent James.. another deeply intense subject.. driftwood ... what stories it could tell... as far as my Empty Tomb poem ... for my parents .. both left this world too soon... had to pen it .. to get it out.. please continue with your wonderful themes... Linda-Marie
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