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When I Think About You

I never thought we would end up like this, two lovers drifting apart Did I do something that started pushing you away, did I say something that I wish I could take back, right now today? On this sea of loneliness, the waves come crashing down Tossing and turning in my sleep, now that you're no longer around Empty days, lonely nights It's hard to breath living without you Knowing you're somewhere else, so far apart, what am I now suppose to do? It's so hard living without you But, I'll always have good memories, the things we did together with such joy I'll always have mental pictures of the past, the beautiful times, when I thought our love would always last Many are the smiles when I think about you Many are the tears, now that I'm living without you Many are my dreams, of you holding me in your arms every night Many are my regrets, that I never really knew how to make things right Still, many are the smiles when I think about you And I think about you often, many a lonely miles

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Date: 3/6/2017 11:10:00 AM
Hi Freddie, You have captured the longing of being without the one you love very well. I also found it to be sad and very romatic.Sometimes in life we don't get that happily ever after. A without a doubt seven and straight into my favs:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:45:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Date: 3/3/2017 9:43:00 PM
This is past the initial state of grief, already the pain has found a positive slant on which to lean itself. This is the verge of a healing that includes a leaving of sharp measure to be felt occasionally over the years. I enjoyed this, as you can tell, it stirred my own emotionally born thoughts. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/3/2017 7:20:00 PM
This is so sad, and yet so special Freddie! I love it. Very well written. Going into my favorites. Thank you. :)
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