When I Stopped

When I Stopped

         the familiar crest of clean cold air
         draws gently in
         and the unlocked open stillness
         flowing out
         poison and cure in harmony

         so much for thinking
         nothing else surrounds us
         now the wishing void
         collapsed
         the shore of a lake opens
         with evening relapsed into night
         all illusion merges into gray
         down and down till
         even the water's edge       gone

         into that fertile ignorance
         headfirst
         fragile beneath this brittle skin
         burning always
         not knowing  the sacred promise
         without substance  
         has begun
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