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When I See Your Charming Face Kawaali

Male Voice When I see, your charming face, O love, I feel proud of my luck, once again, And my heart wants to rejoice, the truth, God must be living, somewhere near the grace. When I look deep into your enchanting eyes, Life began to look, so beautiful and full of craze, When I touch, your silky Rosy lips, I feel a wave of pleasure, running somewhere in me. Female voice When you come, close to my heart, O love, My eyes feel shy, to look at you, Feeling the fragrance of your body my love, My life began to shower, its blessings on me. And whenever, my eyes meet with you, I feel a lightening in my heart, somewhere, As if, on the pages of my heart and mind, O love, You have written a story, which shines with love. Male voice Even if I want to forget, it does not happen, O love, Never ever your image, vanishes from my sight, The moment I remember, your charming face, A poem starts playing on my mind, O love. Female voice The world of heart, is an amazing place, And the traditions of society are such, in every age, Here the moment two hearts sings, a song of love, The world began its best, to make it a song of sadness. Male voice After listening your story, I feel, O love, We too have to follow, the tradition of true love, Still, our soul would meet, if not here, high over there, Where no one would ever, get a chance to betray us. Female voice We see the same story of tragedy, in every age, O love, Whether it was Heer and Ranjha* or Romeo and Juliet, Whenever two hearts meets and celebrate, the festival of love, The world becomes envious, for both the lovers. Together It is not easy to change, the feelings of jealously and hatred on earth, As its lives not only in the east or west, or in the north or south of earth, It flows in the blood streams of human beings and its grows with passion and lust, We would change the traditions of the world & would make a new world beyond earth. Ravindra 11th Jan. 2011

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Date: 1/21/2011 6:37:00 PM
so appreciate your lovely comment Ravindra my friend.. u might enjoy reading The Light.. inspired by a documentary on survival after being deceased for more than ten minutes .. true accounts .. especially am fascinated by that subject of life after death .. as much as am fascinated by your poetic creations .. happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:27:00 PM
The love definitely shines through this Kawaali, Ravindra! Wonderful poetry that makes one smile-- interesting way of presenting this too-- enjoyed reading this and thank you for dropping by my poems :) happy to read yours, Ravindra :) have a great week :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/12/2011 7:26:00 AM
wow! Ravindra, I love the passion, a very breathless ending. The sadness that we all share is beyond compare. But , the charm one can see in ones face, takes us to that one amazing place of a new world. To be in a world without betrail is like magic..in your poem.. Thanks for the wonderful chance to share your tradion and beatuy with us,..Poet D.
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Date: 1/11/2011 2:56:00 PM
ravindra, I could imagine this playing in a theater like the WEst Side Story movie with the characters Maria and Tony. Did you ever see that? Love (and your poem) are beautiful things. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/11/2011 2:05:00 PM
Oh, how grand it would be to find a love like this, Ravindra. There are few men here in the states who have such romantic hearts. Beautitiful Kawaali! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2011 12:10:00 PM
Your writes of love and God are always inspiring. [You have a month to write for my contest Ravi ;), no worries] Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:10:00 AM
Remarkably beautiful Ravindra my friend.. the pleasant lines full of romance and emotion leaves the reader breathless with joy and happiness... so delicate and so special are these intense moments of precious love... u never cease to amaze me with your powerful creations so beautiful... the male and female parts are fantastic and unique luv..
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Date: 1/11/2011 8:06:00 AM
A new theme for Kawaali lovers. A brief about this Kawaali I have placed in my today's blog. With best wishes...Ravindra
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