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When I See You, I Miss You

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When I see you, I miss you Must be the magic in your smile When you kiss me, I love you I haven’t see you for a while For a moment I was dreaming And I thought that you were home Then you kissed me and I knew it And I knew that you would roam In the sunlight when I see you And the freckles on your cheek Takes me back to yesterdays Oh, if only hearts could speak Must be the grace of your affection When I miss you, I feel blue Must be the sense of your attention When I see you, I miss you http://mike-martin.net/When I See You

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Date: 8/21/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thanks. It's festitiously written to my daughter, who will marry soon, so that anyone else would think it's a love song. Hence the freckles.
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Date: 8/20/2015 8:36:00 PM
This has the making's of a great song. Not girl out there that doesn't want it to be about her.
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Date: 8/23/2015 4:12:00 PM
I hope that did not ruin it for you Robert Johnson. I suppose a magician should not reveal his tricks.
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:28:00 PM
Thanks. It's festitiously written to my daughter, who will marry soon, so that anyone else would think it's a love song. Hence the freckles. Your comment means a lot. It is a song now already, but no one has hear it yet.

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