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When I Love

~~~ Love is not Lustful~~~ I love your spirit... I love your mind... I love the way you handle your business! I love the woman in you when you speak to women. I love the man in you when you speak to men. I love the child in you when you speak to children. I love your many walks. Whereby, I will gladly follow you down any street in America and abroad. I will keep in step with your time and change my rhythm to your rhyme. I admire the first touch of you; 'tis the touch of your spirit as it brushes against my soul. It warms me whenever I am cold and cools me whenever I am hot. I am humbled at the first taste of you; as I devour your wisdom as you define the mysteries of my life. When I make love to you... it's with mind, body, spirit, and soul. You have "The all of me"... the best of me... the worst of me... what I reveal and that which is kept in my secrecy. Take me "Now" while I am yours... fearless and free... Take me before I become... other than myself. Not many of us are able to be unguarded, unrepressed, unsheathe; able to be entrusted with our true emotions. Who among us is strong enough to handle love and all its realities? Can I be myself or must I remain within the image of...?

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Date: 7/28/2019 12:49:00 PM
Hi Niyna I love this erotic confessional It sweetens the world! Sex love and art in poetry and life are a few of the things that redeem this crazy world and bring the heat of happiness...mmmmmmm :)
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 7/28/2019 4:30:00 PM
So True.... mmmmm:)
Date: 6/25/2019 9:12:00 AM
This is my favourite this morning. It feels emotionally honest and erotic at the same time.
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 6/26/2019 8:29:00 PM
Freedom to love is one of the true honesties of life. Loving another is very titillating. I am happy your morning started brightly. ~~~Admirably Niyna
Date: 6/17/2019 5:31:00 AM
fearless and free... "Luminosity at its best here, " have a wonderful day dear poet. xo
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 6/18/2019 7:37:00 PM
It is a wonderful thing to be fearless and free. If you have someone in your life that gives you the space to be yourself, the comfort and safety to close your eyes to exhale. A person that knows your many voices and tones_ and know how to ... they just know.... when you are with them you are home in the etheric sense. Thank you for your comment.

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