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When I Leave This Life

When I leave this life, I cannot say if I'll be mourned, but I think I will be.... When I leave this life, I cannot say where I will go, but I hope God will be kind, I pray and ask Him to be so. When I leave this life, I think I will be missed, at least a little... and that is enough--for life must always roll on, never stopping too long, not even for grief or sorrow-- a little sadness is enough, for joy should fill life and the myriad dreams of life. After I've left this life, will I miss those in this world, long to touch my wife, to talk with my friends, to see and hear and laugh with everyone I love...?

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:33:00 PM
I think we all have wondered these things at one time or another. Great write, LJ! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/23/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 6/21/2021 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/21/2021 10:10:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/24/2019 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/25/2019 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Eve
Date: 8/24/2019 11:50:00 AM
God will be kind I'm sure, congrats on this great poem LJ, -luloo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/25/2019 3:11:00 PM
Fingers crossed, Lu Loo! and thanks!
Date: 8/24/2019 8:32:00 AM
- "but I hope God will be kind" ... smile :) - Congratulations on your win, L.J. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/25/2019 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, most kind!
Date: 8/24/2019 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/24/2019 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for the honor, Silent One
Date: 10/4/2017 9:24:00 PM
Charming poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/11/2018 5:06:00 PM
Definitely worthy of another visit, LJ. Superb poem.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/6/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/20/2017 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations L.J. Beautiful!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/21/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate it
Date: 9/20/2017 2:14:00 PM
congratulations LJ
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/21/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 9/20/2017 1:25:00 PM
LJ, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/21/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings-- much appreciated!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/20/2017 8:46:00 AM
Many thanks, Silent One
Date: 8/11/2017 2:43:00 PM
Great introspective poem, LJ: If you are fortunate to live long and then you die, It won't matter you if are missed But while you are alive, you must seize each day!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/12/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph, I'm glad you liked it.

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