When I Leave This Life

When I leave this life, 
I cannot say if I'll be mourned,
but I think I will be....

When I leave this life, 
I cannot say where I will go,
but I hope God will be kind, 
I pray and ask Him to be so.

When I leave this life, 
I think I will be missed,
at least a little... and 
that is enough--for 
life must always roll on, 
never stopping too long, 
not even for grief or sorrow--
a little sadness is enough,
for joy should fill life and 
the myriad dreams of life.

After I've left this life, 
will I miss those in this world,
long to touch my wife, 
to talk with my friends, 
to see and hear and laugh 
with everyone I love...?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Merryman Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 6:33 PM
I think we all have wondered these things at one time or another. Great write, LJ! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Carber Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Kim!
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 5:34 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Thank you!
Roper Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve
Carber Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Eve
Scars Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 11:50 AM
God will be kind I'm sure, congrats on this great poem LJ, -luloo
Carber Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Fingers crossed, Lu Loo! and thanks!
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 8:32 AM
- "but I hope God will be kind" ... smile :) - Congratulations on your win, L.J. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, most kind!
One Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Carber Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Thank you for the honor, Silent One
Gauthier Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Charming poem.
Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Definitely worthy of another visit, LJ. Superb poem.
Carber Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Thank you!
Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations L.J. Beautiful!
Carber Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate it
Webster Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:14 PM
congratulations LJ
Carber Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Jack
La France Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:25 PM
LJ, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
Carber Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings-- much appreciated!
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Carber Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Many thanks, Silent One
Sergi Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Great introspective poem, LJ: If you are fortunate to live long and then you die, It won't matter you if are missed But while you are alive, you must seize each day!
Carber Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Ralph, I'm glad you liked it.
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