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When I Have to Open my Eye

When I have to open my eyes, stop own To remember what the dream is,at sour Gigantic hot gulfs in heart blown Where ebbed fathomless sea, feels sore. The memories going on my mind, That are from years left behind, Very sweet this morning sun Peeps from cotton cloud , give heart burn If every time this still like now One day the tide of it gets overgrow. wide eyes that couldn't get truth, Every pieces inqiure,not own lie, When all happened wit went to dearth Neither mind thought nor mad fly.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/14/2025 11:16:00 AM

Hello Palak, a lovely deep poem with a deep meaning. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2025 11:31:00 AM

Hello Palak, Dreams sometimes makes sense and other times dreams do not make sense. Part of my dreams are clear and the other part is clouded. It is hard to know what a dream means. Your friend /Darlene/

Palak Dadhich
Date: 7/14/2025 7:57:00 PM

Thanks !dear !it's a confusion that going on my mind I cann't sure what is going on. I think so ,my mind cann't at the position to get truth.Whither I see that is truth or what I feel that is truth, I don't sure.your friend/palak/