When I Have to Open my Eye
When I have to open my eyes, stop own
To remember what the dream is,at sour
Gigantic hot gulfs in heart blown
Where ebbed fathomless sea, feels sore.
The memories going on my mind,
That are from years left behind,
Very sweet this morning sun
Peeps from cotton cloud , give heart burn
If every time this still like now
One day the tide of it gets overgrow.
wide eyes that couldn't get truth,
Every pieces inqiure,not own lie,
When all happened wit went to dearth
Neither mind thought nor mad fly.
Copyright © Palak Dadhich | Year Posted 2025
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