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When I Get Old I Will Dazzle Your Eyes Out

When I get old I will dazzle your eyes out I will become a giant spectacular supernova I will be awesome and fierce and people will shudder at my brilliance When I get old I will turn into a cosmos A galaxy of my own truths, and my own opinions I will not be afraid to use my powers to pinpoint your truths and opinions to a flimsy board with a pin. When I get old I will collect my thoughts and Sprinkle them through the galaxy, so upon my death They will land on your heads or spank you with my intelligent imaginative truths.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/9/2019 4:53:00 PM
FAV!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/9/2019 10:00:00 PM
I have a girlfriend who is always showing me a photo of her 3 year old granddaughter and she always prefaces it with "are you ready? She is so beautiful it will dazzle your eyes out."
Date: 7/8/2019 8:06:00 PM
Reg. Ilene's comment: Ha, ha: You are ALREADY doing this. This poem is wink-wink irony, I think. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2019 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. I am smiling big as I read this.
Date: 7/8/2019 2:30:00 PM
why wait? i think you should do all this NOW, caren! great poem...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Ilene. I enjoyed writing it.
Date: 7/8/2019 1:16:00 PM
Oh oy, Caren! This a great write and totally a fun read. Sprinkle them throughout the galaxy. Love it, Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I do believe I will!

Book: Shattered Sighs