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When I First Saw You April 4

When I First Saw You There When I first saw you there You came to me In a dream And disappeared, Haunting me For eight long years. When I First Saw You In Person I was overwhelmed This fairy tale dream of mine This impossible quest To find the girl in the dream Was finally over. She was real, And she was here. In front of me. When I First Spoke With You I knew that this was it We would be together From then on You were the one, I proposed three days later. When I First Kissed You When I first kissed you that was the beginning Of a 40- year love affair. When I Married You That was the beginning Of my life From that moment I had no doubt Whatever life brought my way, You would be there In the end That is all that matters. April 4—List poem w/repetition—write a poem that lists things, using some (not necessarily constant) repetition and variation of an initial phrase (Examples: When I was six…, Remember that time…*, Layers of…., etc.)

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