When I Feel You

when I feel you
your love
your attention

wherever you are
you are near
you are here
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Schlesinger-Fleming Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the PS homepage. Sweet and direct. Love it!
Hoffman Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 11:19 AM
So much said in a few words. Beautiful and heartfelt piece, Otto.
Agustin Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Thanks for sharing this... Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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