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With my last breathe, in the stillness I heard music in His presence With joy, my heart knew such pleasance He smiled light, ending all illness When my eyes met the One I love There came a feeling of wonder Despite His grace, there was thunder My heart rose, He came from above I’ve never felt such elation Stars inside, I knew surety Boldly I opened up to Him I’m thankful for my foundation Pulling me close, security Through living waters, I’ll yet swim I Died Poetry Contest Sponsored by: craig cornish April 4, 2023

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Date: 4/4/2023 1:07:00 PM
Very lovely, Regina.
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Date: 4/4/2023 9:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your sonnet today, Gina. Obviously since none of us are dead, we have a choice as to what we believe. Faith/speculation/logic all play a part of our beliefs. Be well dear friend:)
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