When I Die

When I die turn me into ash
Set me on a bar room table
Order me up a Lone Star beer
Pour me a shot of Black Label

Don't mix me up with old saw dust
Or let smoke get under my lid
Not too close to that dance floor crowd
And away from that drunken kid

Just want to rest and close my eyes
While I hear an old fiddle sing
I'll just pretend I hear Bob Wills
And imagine that he's still king


4-15-19
Contest: April 2019 Contest 5, Max 12 Lines
Sponsor:Brian Strand

Note: I am an old man and I thought a practical approach to death - rather than a $20,000 funeral would get legs. However it seems the younger generation found it not applicable.
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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Good plan, Larry. No rush though hopefully.
Bradfield Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Thanks, Line...LOL..no rush is right. Do you mind telling me if you live in Eastern or Western Canada?
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