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When I Cry,I Cry Alone

WHEN I CRY, I CRY ALONE.. IN A WORLD SO COLD WITH NO PLACE TO CALL HOME... THINKING AN FEELIN LIKE EVERYDAY IS MY LAST .. DWELLING SO DEEP DOWN IN THE PAST...MY MIND IS ROTTING... NEVER AGAIN WILL IT EVER BE CLEAR BECAUSE MY NEED FOR LOVE IS NOW MY FEAR.... HEART TAKEN OVER BY PAIN THE SUN TAKEN OVER BY RAIN WISHING SOMEONE WOULD CRY WITH ME JUST SO THEY CAN FEEL THE SAME THIS LIFE IS NOT A GAME.. FAILING TO SEE WHERE I STAND IN TIME AN WHEN I CRY I CRY ALONE BECAUSE THIS LIFE IS ALWAYS ON MY MIND TRING TO CHANGE IT, REARANGE IT, SO THAT ITS MORE SUITABLE FOR ME .. TAKE A WALK IN MY SHOES AN U WILL SEE WHY WHEN I CRY I CRY ALONE JUST WANTING THAT HAPPY HOME!

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Date: 12/28/2008 10:23:00 AM
Shaquana - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/15/2008 1:24:00 PM
I love this poem becase it's simple and based on emotion and i know what it islike to cry alone. but be strong becuase it canonly get better if you want better.
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Date: 12/15/2008 12:26:00 PM
I feel the same as you do, when I cry I cry alone to. Nice write sad but good... it's like this poem was meant for me to read... read my poem Who Will and let me know what you think... *Breana
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