When I Am No More

When I was lying on bed
That was cumpltly red
My soul standing beside me
Stared at me lyk it was my last breath

Thn I suddenly realised 
Tht I was no more to live my life
All I lost my life in an accident 
I met last night

My soul walked away 
Showing no mercy
But why it happened to me
Done nothing still got the pain

My soul thn went Fr journey
With a bag full of my memories 
At frst he reached at my frnd's house
Thn took out a memory frm tht bag
It was the memory of my frnd n r frst late night talk
Wer v alwys had a fite 
Wer v alwys had a talk of r life
It ws nathin bt stil gt everything 
My soul gav tht memory to my frnd 
He strtd crying
I wish I could wipe his tears
Bt thn I realised 
I was no more alive

Crying Fr a while 
With no tears in my eyes
Taking the bag again 
Wnt Fr journey again
Aftr a distance travelled 
My soul
Entered into a lovely street
Picking another memory frm tht bag
He made stunned Fr while
It was the Memory of my frst love
The gal who made feel spcl was sitting down the stairs
Wer v usually had r meets
My arms Wer missing her
My eyes Wer missing her
He gave the memory to her
Haah!!!
Its the memory of my frst date
The day I nly went on my knees proposing her Fr life long love,
Looking at tht memory 
She started laughing 
Bt tears started rolling frm her eyes
Tht I could only see
I wanted to console her 
Bt thn I realised 
I was no more alive

Leaving my frst love behind
My soul took me to govt's quarter
In the corner of the room there was a man sitting 
He handed him the memory of my frst bike ride
It was my brother who taught me how to drive 
The day wen he gave me frst driving lessons 
I was sincerely listening al his instructions 
Bt failed to apply in my real life
Made a mistake n tasted death
He was cursing himself Fr teaching me to ride
Wanted to go bck n mend tht past
Bt it ws too long
I wnted to tell him srryy
Bt thn I realised 
I was no more alive

I thought it ws the last memory of mine
Bt thn my soul hold my hand n took me to my home
I was scared to enter my home at late night
Bt thn I realised 
I was no more alive

The last memory in tht bag 
I wished it was nevr revealed 
Bt thn the soul took tht also out n handed ovr to my mother
My mother was in a shock
Tht her son was no more live
Gathering al my after life courage 
I saw that memory 
Huhhh...
It was my frst day on these heavenly planet
Al over my family was raining happiness 
My mother was very joyful to see me
Still remember her touch,Her stories

Before my last sleep 
I wanted to request my mother 
To say story of devil n angel
Bt thn I realised 
I was no more alive

Sorry my frnd Fr making u cry
Sorry my love Fr making u single
Sorry my brother Fr making u to regret wat u have
Sorry my sister Fr making one hand less Fr rakhi
Srry my mother Fr leaving u alone in this world
Srry my mother Fr leaving u alone in this world
  
I wanted to sorry each one of in my life
Bt its too late
Cause
I M NO MORE ALIVE!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/29/2015 12:55:00 PM
Recollections and our common journey to the Promised Land from ourselves live in your verse intensely.Congrat.
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Date: 1/24/2015 11:31:00 PM
Hope to see you post another poem. SKAT
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Date: 1/24/2015 1:02:00 PM
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:40:00 AM
WOW,Pratik, this is deep:) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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