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When I Am Gone

When I am gone The world will end Was it here before All that we assume is real Just imaginative décor Imagination our minds creation True source of all sensed sensation Touch Taste Hearing Sight or Smell None exist except to dwell Within our minds ears eyes nose and cells So was it really here before Of this I’m really not quite sure But of one thing I am quite certain When I pass beyond the curtain There’ll be nothing there to greet Just oblivion quite replete A nothing never nowhere blend To decorate my final end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/19/2016 3:03:00 AM
I enjoyed your philosophical, reflective piece!! Congrats Howard, for having your work featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Howard Tunick
Date: 11/19/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Teddy. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/18/2016 9:11:00 PM
Hi Howard, Thank you for your write. It sparked the internal struggle I have. I was tought that the dead are conscious of nothing but the living are conscience they will die. Yet science supports that there may be a soul or something that continues on after death. I feel there is another party after this one. Please share more of your poems / thoughts. JP
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Howard Tunick
Date: 11/20/2016 7:54:00 AM
JP, Thank you for the read. The dead live on in the memories of those left behind. The dead themselves are wrapped in the comfort of oblivion. I'm wondering what "science" there is that might support the existence of a "soul" that is connected to the departed and continues after death?
Date: 6/12/2015 12:11:00 PM
Food for thought. I suppose imagination is what makes living worth while. What happens beyond is strictly imagination. I agree. Love, daver
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Date: 5/28/2015 5:48:00 AM
But there will be a nice view from Fountain hill Cemetery surely? ....Ivor
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:49:00 PM
thought provoking write Howard! :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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