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When I (Unconditionally)

When I think of you, I want to speak to you
When I talk to you, I wish to see you
When our eyes connect, I long to kiss you
When our kiss concludes, I desperately miss you
When I express my feelings, I expose myself to you
When I share my thoughts, I feel much closer to you
When our hands meet, I sensually anticipate you
When our bodies fuse, I emotionally escape with you
When I am not in your presence, I place my trust in you
When I am tested vigorously, I unconditionally love you



{Des Juan Marquise}

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/31/2010 11:35:00 AM

such a provocative write you should ry it without the "When I's" for who else would be speaking & then others can more easily imagine themselves in your place! We miss you!!! Light & Love

Deneen White

Date: 6/21/2009 9:49:00 AM

as usual you pull me into your writes, it gives one a sense of peace and tranqulity, take care D-nyce

Deneen White

Date: 6/21/2009 9:48:00 AM

hi Des Juan, good to hear from you again as you can see I have not been on the soup for a while, I have been busy going back to school still writing, but i have not actually posted any poems in the soup lately, thanks for your generous comments, they mean alot, how have you been, I hope that everything is well with you, how is your son, well I hope, I bet you are still a workaholic, lol take care D-nyce

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/11/2009 4:58:00 AM

Love this one!espacially the lines:"When our eyes connect, I long to kiss you When our kiss concludes, I desperately miss you " It tells so much!Gone to my favs!:)

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/5/2009 1:20:00 PM

Des Jaun, this is softly touching, and I am sure that special one knows she is special with your talented words that sings from the page. Thank you for your kind comments always.