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When Her Own Payment Came Due

When Her Own Payment Came Due Came torturing moment that she just knew he could never be her eternal love No old age, everlasting for the two their love would die, no reprieve from above Yet his touch scorched her into frenzy days were spent fighting loss's sad arrival His kiss sent her world into a tizzy afterwards she'd fight for her survival Finding Fate hard, seeing future regrets nights now spent enjoying lover's touch Present time was just as good as it gets for burning love seared her far, far too much Dawn broke, came that sad moment she just knew Years flown by, now her own payment came due R.J. Lindley Sept 20th, 1978 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 15 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 105 Old Note- Some earthly loves are only destroyed by death.. If one ever finds such and lives it they should consider it a great blessing despite the sad end.(1978) New Note- Has now been found, now awaiting the end...... fleeting time it may or may not be but life has never had any guarantees. (2016)

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Date: 8/18/2016 2:56:00 AM
Old loves never die.... 1978 ! what a bad year it was..... I enjoyed your work..
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:56:00 AM
Fighting loss' sad arrival.. what an exceptional line.the poem' s sad lament for me ends in a question mark. I mean , why does she leave?? That is what always tears me up... lovely write
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Date: 8/16/2016 7:30:00 PM
Came by to read things again! :)
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:06:00 AM
A pleasure to read, I enjoyed each line, Robert - and what a great ending ... CayCay
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Date: 8/13/2016 10:54:00 PM
A loss for words, you are a true poet! :)
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