When Heart Passes Baton To Head

Let dead rocks of reason lie on the way,
Let all logic, all do's and don'ts lie still,
The rules of grammar gathered yesterday,
Of metre and foot, let them let-down feel
If lines river-like flow to move ahead,
Let melody get born with utter poise,
Let lilting lines listen to inner voice,
O to flow ahead—heart-over-head led.
In purest form and the plainest by far,
Like a perennial stream flows a poem,
Each line a starlet shoring up the star,
And sparkling like rarest of studded gem!
And crafted, caressing the created—
A call of heart passing baton to head!



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A poem flows like a river. The head with its do's and don'ts plays the role of rocks blocking river's flow. But the river finds its way still and music is born. A poem is always a product of heart to start with. The heart has reasons unknown to head. A stage still comes when head slowly takes over as there is no escape from it. Yet, creativity comes from the chaos created by heart— the source of all poems!



08.03.2020


Heart Truth
Contest Judged:  8/9/2020 
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Winner: FIRST PLACE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/12/2020 2:40:00 AM
Your muse is embedded with stunning imagery and dreams. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 8/15/2020 10:42:00 PM
Thanks for reading the poem and liking it.. and I liked your comments
Date: 8/10/2020 5:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Aniruddha :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 8/15/2020 10:45:00 PM
Thanks indeed dear poet/reader and keep smiling at my poems.
Date: 8/2/2020 1:50:00 PM
TO ME!!!!NOW!!!!
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 8/15/2020 10:47:00 PM
Sure, but let me complete my course of full run, ha ha, thanks dear poet.
Date: 8/2/2020 1:25:00 PM
This is great Poetry
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 8/15/2020 10:49:00 PM
Thanks, I'm humbled, dear Silent One, but your comments speak eloquently.
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