When He Stops Remembering the Sweetness of Her Name

When its time to for him to sail away like wind-blown leaves and cherry blossoms drifting in the lake When He journeys far,as far as moons to reach When He forgets the fragrance of Her hair and how She tasted 'neath fresh linen sheets When He forgets the sweetness of her name and all the thousand ways She loved him through each day Its then,She will remember each promise they concealed Its then when She would whisper,'Come back and lay with me Come close ,and tread all solitude beneath your tired feet Look deep into these eyes and tell me what you see. Tell me,are your nights long,are they vacant and cold Or do the tea-light candles still glow to keep you warm?' Its then where She would whisper ,'Come back and lay with me Embraced by open arms is where you ought to be' But whispers slowly fade like ripples of fresh rain that once flooded this heart,then dried like ash of grey . Her whispers go unanswered,His silence will prevail His cheeks won't feel each tear drop,His heart buries the pain. His mind rejects the memory and moments they have shared But thoughts keep spreading freely like wings of soaring birds Thoughts will keep returning, years after His regrets Recalling yester's green fields and a lady with a hat A lady on a blanket,hands wrapped around her knees His shoes right there beside her,a fondled kiss in breeze. She must have been the one...All along She was the one The girl that keeps on living ,the shadow in his dreams.... The girl that keeps on playing ,pressing his piano keys.
Inspired by Alexis 'Contest ...and by Elton John's Song - The One..(Not for contest)

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Date: 4/10/2017 9:12:00 PM
An intertwining remembrance between two souls from the side of a heart that still beats for two. With fresh scents and lost pretense, a hopeful sense of loss in each sunrise. Truly, a story of a love that lives in it's own universe. Epicly awaiting the possibility of what maybe even God doesn't know. ;/
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Date: 4/9/2017 9:12:00 AM
Charma, incredible the beauty of this poem. The feeling of loss, the girl in the shadow and the keys... sigh ...
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Date: 4/7/2017 7:58:00 AM
When it's the "one" it can never be forgotten. It's a connection that time does not erase. It's a constant light that shines and breaks through the ugliness of this broken realm. Well done....TAH
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Date: 4/6/2017 5:58:00 PM
One sided love found too late expressed so perfectly. You are so good.
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Date: 4/6/2017 4:47:00 PM
When she dreams she still dreams of him wondering, does he dream of her? She collects flowers from the garden living in a fragrance they once shared, does he sow for her, grow regrets? She sings love songs sent on a warm breeze his direction, does he harmonize with her voice or does he play a tune of some other distant longing? Your beautiful poem says all of this to me in an alluring voice that would tells me he must dream of , grow for and sing with her. Beautifully sad my sweet friend.
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Date: 4/6/2017 3:51:00 PM
It is sad when the silence take hold. I like that she never gives up hope...love the melancholy tone and the lovely imagery. Such a terrific poem...a fav Charma
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