Lin Lane Poet Romanticism

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When He Kissed Me

What a good night kiss!  I think I've fallen in love.

Each time you take my hand and pull me close to you,
there's a trembling in my heart. I hope you feel it, too.
Something in me responded to the warmth of that kiss.
So gentle; I felt like a flower caressed by morning mist.

The touch of your lips on mine. Oh,  the memory lingers.
Love the way you hold my hand and entwine our fingers.
It must be love! I want to sing words of passion's song.
Stay wrapped in your arms and dance all night long.

My dream tonight will be so sweet, for I will be with you.
And by the time night is over and the sky has turned blue,
I will have confessed my love with each whispered breath.
A love to pale the brightest diamond; to last beyond death.

If love is meant to be,  meet me in the black velvet sky.
Close your eyes, take my hand, and away we will fly
through the light of golden stars and silver moonbeams.
Good night, Darling. I love you.  I'll see you in my dream.

November 24th, 2015
In The Mood For Love Contest
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Neva Romaine November 30, 2015 at 10:33 AM Hey Lin, a hearty congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem!! Beautiful writing and expression. Be Blessed, Neva

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 3:01 PM WOW, Lin, Congratulations on your lovely poetic mood win. LUV SKAT Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:47 PM Thank you so much, skat.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 26, 2015 at 9:52 PM Such a sweet romantic Lin.. Congrats on first place win ! Lin Lane November 27, 2015 at 2:58 AM Thank you so very much! ;)

Balveen Cheema November 26, 2015 at 7:44 PM Oooish! Velvetty sky, silver moonbeams, golden stars , holding hands and kissing-too romantic, Lin! No wonder it got the first placement! Love, Balveen Lin Lane November 26, 2015 at 9:04 PM lol Balveen... all that's missing is the man. Thank you.

Jan Allison November 26, 2015 at 5:19 PM Dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane November 26, 2015 at 9:03 PM Thank you, Jan.

John Hamilton November 26, 2015 at 3:35 PM Congrats on first place well done. JDH Lin Lane November 26, 2015 at 9:03 PM Thanks a lot, John

Shadow Hamilton November 26, 2015 at 2:40 PM superb Lin congrats on 1st place hugs Lin Lane November 26, 2015 at 9:02 PM Thank you so very much, Shadow. I appreciate you for liking this and also for hosting a fun contest. Hugs to you.

James Inman November 25, 2015 at 7:21 PM Sweet dreams Lin. Lovely poem. Lin Lane November 25, 2015 at 9:07 PM lol Thanks a lot, James. ;)

Tim Smith November 24, 2015 at 3:20 PM Very beautiful Lin Lin Lane November 24, 2015 at 3:29 PM Merci beaucoup, Tim.

Kevin Leake November 24, 2015 at 2:55 PM A romantic touch Lin, Beautifully written the words roll of the page!! Best Wishes Kevin Lin Lane November 24, 2015 at 3:28 PM Thanks, Kevin. I appreciate your visit and comments.

Jan Allison November 24, 2015 at 2:43 PM oh so beautifully romantic Lin good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane November 24, 2015 at 2:53 PM Thanks, Jan. I was sighing over that kiss.

Eileen Manassian November 24, 2015 at 11:02 AM Lovely, Lin....you really let the sweetness of love flow in every line. Didn't know there was a contest like this going....Good luck. Lin Lane November 24, 2015 at 12:12 PM It was that kiss, and I found the perfect picture of just the kind I wanted. Thanks for reading this one.

Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2015 at 9:24 AM So sweet and romantic! Lovely piece. Lin Lane November 24, 2015 at 9:41 AM Thank you, Richard. It's all about the kiss. ;)