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What a good night kiss! I think I've fallen in love. Each time you take my hand and pull me close to you, there's a trembling in my heart. I hope you feel it, too. Something in me responded to the warmth of that kiss. So gentle; I felt like a flower caressed by morning mist. The touch of your lips on mine. Oh, the memory lingers. Love the way you hold my hand and entwine our fingers. It must be love! I want to sing words of passion's song. Stay wrapped in your arms and dance all night long. My dream tonight will be so sweet, for I will be with you. And by the time night is over and the sky has turned blue, I will have confessed my love with each whispered breath. A love to pale the brightest diamond; to last beyond death. If love is meant to be, meet me in the black velvet sky. Close your eyes, take my hand, and away we will fly through the light of golden stars and silver moonbeams. Good night, Darling. I love you. I'll see you in my dream. November 24th, 2015 In The Mood For Love Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 11/30/2015 10:33:00 AM
Hey Lin, a hearty congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem!! Beautiful writing and expression. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:01:00 PM
WOW, Lin, Congratulations on your lovely poetic mood win. LUV SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2015 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, skat.
Date: 11/26/2015 9:52:00 PM
Such a sweet romantic Lin.. Congrats on first place win !
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Date: 11/27/2015 2:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much! ;)
Date: 11/26/2015 7:44:00 PM
Oooish! Velvetty sky, silver moonbeams, golden stars , holding hands and kissing-too romantic, Lin! No wonder it got the first placement! Love, Balveen
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Date: 11/26/2015 9:04:00 PM
lol Balveen... all that's missing is the man. Thank you.
Date: 11/26/2015 5:19:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/26/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 11/26/2015 3:35:00 PM
Congrats on first place well done. JDH
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Date: 11/26/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thanks a lot, John
Date: 11/26/2015 2:40:00 PM
superb Lin congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 11/26/2015 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Shadow. I appreciate you for liking this and also for hosting a fun contest. Hugs to you.
Date: 11/25/2015 7:21:00 PM
Sweet dreams Lin. Lovely poem.
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Date: 11/25/2015 9:07:00 PM
lol Thanks a lot, James. ;)
Date: 11/24/2015 3:20:00 PM
Very beautiful Lin
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:29:00 PM
Merci beaucoup, Tim.
Date: 11/24/2015 2:55:00 PM
A romantic touch Lin, Beautifully written the words roll of the page!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:28:00 PM
Thanks, Kevin. I appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/24/2015 2:43:00 PM
oh so beautifully romantic Lin good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2015 2:53:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I was sighing over that kiss.
Date: 11/24/2015 11:02:00 AM
Lovely, Lin....you really let the sweetness of love flow in every line. Didn't know there was a contest like this going....Good luck.
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Date: 11/24/2015 12:12:00 PM
It was that kiss, and I found the perfect picture of just the kind I wanted. Thanks for reading this one.
Date: 11/24/2015 9:24:00 AM
So sweet and romantic! Lovely piece.
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. It's all about the kiss. ;)

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