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His mother was extremely keen He should marry a pretty colleen But Harry met Larry And they did not tarry Their marriage it was not foreseen! His girlfriend he was due to marry But secretly Harry wed Larry His mother went mad And so did his dad It’s a burden they have to carry 01/03/18

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Date: 1/13/2018 2:29:00 PM
LOL, I'm still grinning as I type this
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:33:00 PM
I heard the Buzzcocks song and got this silly poem in my head lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/10/2018 3:23:00 PM
Lol! I love this double limerick style and your fun, witty write!
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Anna:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/4/2018 9:40:00 AM
So well done, Jan. I loved it. It's about time things change. Love is love xxoo
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:34:00 PM
I agree Mike but there is still so much prejudice:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/4/2018 1:16:00 AM
Good ones, Jan. Sadly though, parents even today are acting like this or disowning their kids. I am thinking of you and saying a prayer for ya today. I hope your mind is very soon at ease.
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I'm finally trying to get caught up with commenting. I remember posting this one the day before my op and had fun with the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 7:15:00 PM
I say we should all have equal opportunity to lose half of our good shnit. Whatever. Great write!
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:39:00 PM
I agree Rhoda:-)Sorry for the delay in replying but I've been in hospital. Hope you are ok :-) xx hugs jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 6:30:00 PM
That's a fun poem on a topic that so often brings conflict (and I can't for my life figure out why this should be such a big deal). Congrats to Harry and Larry, may they live happily ever after. Hugs!
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:40:00 PM
I purchase my first ever 'civil ceremony' card in November for 2 friends but the poem is just a fiction poem inspired by the song:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 6:30:00 PM
Awe, but don't they know they're gaining another son? I'm sure in time they'll come to love them both... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:41:00 PM
What a lovely comment Akkina!!!:-) Its just a fiction poem inspired by the song but it could be so true too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 5:41:00 PM
His marriage surprised his mom & dad~and left them feeling kind of sad~but love is strange~twas time for a change~they pranced down the aisle rainbow clad.
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:00:00 PM
lol John I love your reply:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 5:37:00 PM
well done, jan! i guess everyone has to just roll with the times. any parent should be happy that his/her child is happy with whatever partner he/she chooses...
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:01:00 PM
The times they are a changing and for the better Ilene - no one can help who they fall in love with:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 2:31:00 PM
- It's time for mom and dad to see their son ... and accept and love him as he is :) - Fun but also a bit sad, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:06:00 PM
True Anne-Lise and it can split families which is so sad:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 2:19:00 PM
Jan: As a elderly parent I shudder to think. However: I believe you've put the burden where it belongs. Thanks for sharing this insight with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Old Buck it was inspired by the song but we do have friends who recently underwent a civil ceremony but their parents were very happy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 12:10:00 PM
Written with your usual delightful humor Jan. I enjoyed! : )
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 10:37:00 AM
Insecurity amongst the elder scene...making Harry met Larry obscene...two men embracing... folks about facing...like it's something they've never seen
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:09:00 PM
Fabulous poetic reply Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/3/2018 8:58:00 AM
Very cute and clever as usual!
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

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