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When Fuchsia Zinnias Disappear

The zinnias  purchased were of fuchsia
        
          Then reproduction died

      All the beauty's contribution
     
                    Left garden's side

Sadness filled lovers' hearts; tore them apart

          Gold zinnias left, too
    
      She decided green ones to start

                    Some orange, not blue 

Patience grows a garden, prayer gives hope

          Love covers many sins

      Giving the faithful means to cope

                    Right always wins 


Written: January 05, 2023
Sponsor: Constance La France
Contest: Zip, zig, zag, zing

Checked with syllablecounter.net, orange can be pronounced with one syllable and in this poem it is one syllable.

Colors of zinnias given as gifts have meaning. 
Fuchsia, hot pink, magenta means deep and everlasting love
Yellow means warmth and happiness
Green means nature, renewal, growth, and emotion
Orange means health and vitality
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:56 AM
Sara, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, nice poem, I like your image, well done, Constance
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January 24, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Constance, Thanks for stopping by and letting me know I placed. Your thoughtfulness is appreciated. Sara
Rose  Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:42 AM
I always love perusing in your garden through your vivid poetry Sara, thank you for grazing my heart and eyes today. Congrats on your win xo
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Why, thank you, Rose. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Back with many congratulations on your contest win Kim, it's well deserved with this stunning poetry.
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Sara, nicely done, congratulations on your win, I also wrote about Zinnia flowers.
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 3:20 AM
Tania, Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I think someone else wrote about zinnias as well. Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:17 AM
- What a wonderful poem ... a winning poem for sure, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, SS. Sara
Radice Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Colours, nature, the natural world. I really enjoy reading about the themes that crop up in your poems Sara. All the very best for 2023. Cheers - Gary
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Gary, Thank you. I hope this year has much awesomeness in store for you and your family. Your visits are always delightful. Sara
George Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Your poem with small notes on the significance of colors is beautifully composed. All the best in the contest , dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Valsa, Thank you for your visit. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Wow, you did a great job with your Z word. Dear Heart will like yours better than mine, haha. Mine was making fun of zucchini.
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Andrea, I kind of doubt that she will like mine better. Thanks for dropping by with a kind review. Sara
Poet Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Amazing wisdom for a living can be found in this poem: A landscape can be grown with perseverance, and faith can be found through meditation; nevertheless, compassion can hide a myriad of faults. Providing the loyal with the tools to adapt means that justice will prevail.
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Lasaad, Thank you for your deep thoughts about my work. I appreciate you dropping by, reading and taking time to comment on my work. Sara
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Awesome life lessons in this lovely poem: Patience grows a garden, prayer gives one hope-- Love covers many sins Giving the faithful means to cope-- Right always wins.
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Vijay, I appreciate your thoughtful review of my work. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara
Daniel Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 8:29 PM
I wrote on zinnia too, Sara, but yours is deeper:)
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:06 AM
I will have to look your work up and see what you had to say about those beautiful zinnias. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara
Peck Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Ah, Sara--your poem is so lovely. It will win, I hope.
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Why, thank you, Ann. I appreciate the kind review and time spent here. Sara
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