When Forever Calls

And when forever calls my name
               To leave the garden of my life
For one last stroll along the path
      For one last look at what I’ve grown

I’ll smile with happiness and joy
                   For every flower that I see
Each one a symbol of the love
           Of every person that I’ve known

Perhaps grandmother’s yellow rose
                 To start my journey’s reverie
Will be in blossom once again
                      So beautiful in every way

For friends, the daffodils I count
                So many I am blessed to see
My family, sunflowers bear
                  To celebrate this special day

Though bittersweet to say goodbye 
             As earthly flowers ebb and flow
Believing in great love ahead
                 I’ll know that it is time to go

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Date: 6/18/2024 2:45:00 AM
Looking back at the beauty you are leaving behind you. And your descriptions are of high degree.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor !!!
Date: 6/18/2024 12:23:00 AM
"Though bittersweet to say goodbye As earthly flowers ebb and flow Believing in great love ahead I’ll know that it is time to go" - A very beautiful poem. Though it's a free verse, it has music. Great work.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:55:00 AM
Thank you smooch Christuraj!!!
Date: 6/17/2024 3:09:00 PM
Excellent poem Mike. Your gratitude and love shine through! Very well done. Happy Monday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi xxoo
Date: 6/17/2024 2:10:00 PM
Utterly and completely glorious poem Mike honestly! I just love it! Any special flowers in your beautiful garden for your poet friends hehe!! Debx
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Date: 6/17/2024 4:32:00 PM
Oh…l like your new avatar!! Debx
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