Joseph P. DiMino Poet Free verse

When feeling empty

When feeling empty
I often write -- 

strange, how, somehow
emptying more seems
start a fill --

from the outside 
re-connecting the within -- 
where I draw from 
reserve – ours I like
to believe a dimension
of shared admissions

becoming childlike
opening to acceptance

the need for mirrors:
as well as for makeup,
more-so, for busting pimples
and cleaning teeth~
our blemishes, bits and pieces of
one another

we see our digestions
in the images of others

what we eat, breathe, 
dream, and pray -- both
inner and outer garments
reflections...

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Victor Buhagiar March 11, 2024 at 4:43 AM There is emotion here. A poem to digest. Joseph P. DiMino March 11, 2024 at 7:05 AM Hi Victor; thank you. Just trying to be honest with self -- I have no answers. Somethings just seem to work...till I am shown better, or am forced to move blindly on. Who knows?

Ink Empress March 11, 2024 at 3:47 AM Both inner and outer garments, sometimes we need to take a minute to slow down breathe, to connect with inner self, consciousness as theres so much of what we seek for outside also within, i really love the way youv described those little things we do everyday, and how youv stated that it is strange in times of emptiness we somehow start to fill or in other words, we find ourselves. As they say; tears and emotions too have tales. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light Joseph P. DiMino March 11, 2024 at 7:07 AM Wonderful, deep meaning constructive comment. Enjoyed very much! No true darkness in God's creation...only a lot of selves keeping out the Light.

Valsa George March 10, 2024 at 10:42 PM It is when we feel empty that we make a conscious effort to connect with a power inside us. Then we are able to see things in a better light. It can lead to creativity too that gives us spouts of joy. Then the rigidity in us leaves and we become childlike, arousing in us a need to beautify our 'outer and inner garments'. A powerful metaphoric writing, dear Joe which I greatly enjoyed. Joseph P. DiMino March 11, 2024 at 7:11 AM Sounds like you have found wise bearings worthy of sharing. A joy to read your loving, positive comment. Sheds light on important subjects, feelings that effect all of us. Blessings my friend.

Hilda Greenhough March 10, 2024 at 5:19 PM Feeling empty is a struggle caused by many things. A good night's rest seems to rejuvenate but by end of day, I'm empty again. I like this poem. It is direct and heartwarming. Joseph P. DiMino March 10, 2024 at 5:27 PM Hi Hilda; empty is preparation...when we rest, our soul travels to higher realms of respite and inspiration. Thank you, my friend. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit March 9, 2024 at 11:53 AM That is the power of your muse, my friend. --When feeling empty I often write -- strange, how, somehow emptying more seems start a fill --That is the joy of creating something from nothing. Joseph P. DiMino March 10, 2024 at 8:12 AM Easier to write on a clean slate...than a dirty blackboard. While tutoring children can make them successful...it will not necessarily make them individual. Always try to see and focus on innate talents~ a good teacher as well learns from his students.

Silent One March 9, 2024 at 10:32 AM Hey Joe.. Your poem offers a poignant reflection on the transformative power of writing and self-exploration. It reminds us of the importance of embracing our vulnerabilities and imperfections, and finding solace in the shared experiences of others... Joseph P. DiMino March 10, 2024 at 8:04 AM Thank you, Si; for taking time to read and digest this work. Your in-depth comment is greatly appreciated. Have a great weekend my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2024 at 9:51 AM - "from the outside re-connecting the within " you're right... hard to explain... but, a feeling I know, Joe :) - Great written :) - Ha a lovely weekend :) - hugs Joseph P. DiMino March 9, 2024 at 10:03 AM Thank you, Anne; and you also have a beautiful weekend with friends and loved ones. Blessings.