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When feeling empty

When feeling empty I often write -- strange, how, somehow emptying more seems start a fill -- from the outside re-connecting the within -- where I draw from reserve – ours I like to believe a dimension of shared admissions becoming childlike opening to acceptance the need for mirrors: as well as for makeup, more-so, for busting pimples and cleaning teeth~ our blemishes, bits and pieces of one another we see our digestions in the images of others what we eat, breathe, dream, and pray -- both inner and outer garments reflections...

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/11/2024 4:43:00 AM

There is emotion here. A poem to digest.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/11/2024 7:05:00 AM

Hi Victor; thank you. Just trying to be honest with self -- I have no answers. Somethings just seem to work...till I am shown better, or am forced to move blindly on. Who knows?

Ink Empress

Date: 3/11/2024 3:47:00 AM

Both inner and outer garments, sometimes we need to take a minute to slow down breathe, to connect with inner self, consciousness as theres so much of what we seek for outside also within, i really love the way youv described those little things we do everyday, and how youv stated that it is strange in times of emptiness we somehow start to fill or in other words, we find ourselves. As they say; tears and emotions too have tales. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/11/2024 7:07:00 AM

Wonderful, deep meaning constructive comment. Enjoyed very much! No true darkness in God's creation...only a lot of selves keeping out the Light.

Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2024 10:42:00 PM

It is when we feel empty that we make a conscious effort to connect with a power inside us. Then we are able to see things in a better light. It can lead to creativity too that gives us spouts of joy. Then the rigidity in us leaves and we become childlike, arousing in us a need to beautify our 'outer and inner garments'. A powerful metaphoric writing, dear Joe which I greatly enjoyed.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/11/2024 7:11:00 AM

Sounds like you have found wise bearings worthy of sharing. A joy to read your loving, positive comment. Sheds light on important subjects, feelings that effect all of us. Blessings my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/10/2024 5:19:00 PM

Feeling empty is a struggle caused by many things. A good night's rest seems to rejuvenate but by end of day, I'm empty again. I like this poem. It is direct and heartwarming.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/10/2024 5:27:00 PM

Hi Hilda; empty is preparation...when we rest, our soul travels to higher realms of respite and inspiration. Thank you, my friend. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/9/2024 11:53:00 AM

That is the power of your muse, my friend. --When feeling empty I often write -- strange, how, somehow emptying more seems start a fill --That is the joy of creating something from nothing.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/10/2024 8:12:00 AM

Easier to write on a clean slate...than a dirty blackboard. While tutoring children can make them successful...it will not necessarily make them individual. Always try to see and focus on innate talents~ a good teacher as well learns from his students.

Silent One

Date: 3/9/2024 10:32:00 AM

Hey Joe.. Your poem offers a poignant reflection on the transformative power of writing and self-exploration. It reminds us of the importance of embracing our vulnerabilities and imperfections, and finding solace in the shared experiences of others...

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/10/2024 8:04:00 AM

Thank you, Si; for taking time to read and digest this work. Your in-depth comment is greatly appreciated. Have a great weekend my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2024 9:51:00 AM

- "from the outside re-connecting the within " you're right... hard to explain... but, a feeling I know, Joe :) - Great written :) - Ha a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/9/2024 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, Anne; and you also have a beautiful weekend with friends and loved ones. Blessings.