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When Dreams Die

When Dreams Die Memories linger of us holding hands, sharing dreams we'd make come true. Dead and buried with you are our plans. I've no need of dreams without you. Where do dreams go when they die? Do they just fade away or disappear? Do they feel pain, and do they cry? Do they face their death in fear? Answers to questions I've longed to hear. If they are poised ready upon your lips, please whisper them into my ear, While I stand in watch at their crypt. I can no longer wish upon a falling star, asking that my dreams might come true. Has my sorrow taken me much too far that I no longer care what I might do? I once gazed upon the starlit skies, dreaming of a romantic wedding night, but the twinkle no longer lives in my eyes; They are black holes, staring without sight. What hope for dead stars and dreams? None that seem clear to me. Death is permanent for both it seems. Were my dreams never meant to be? No longer do I revel in the moon's pale light, reminders of the nights we once shared, of reveries and fantasies to which we gave flight, of the nights when our souls were bared. Shrouded in black, my dreams lay in death. Now I know where they go when they die. Deep within my heart, but with nary a breath, Dreams, did you hear me whisper, "Goodbye?" October 26, 2015 Lin Lane Any Sad Poem, sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 11/4/2015 12:24:00 AM
Terrific write, Lin, and I particularly love verses five and six- the imagery and an eternal question, I think. Wonderful. Congrats, and well done. Viv x
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Date: 11/3/2015 5:38:00 PM
Back again , this time to congratulate you on your win with this gem!
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Date: 11/3/2015 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert.
Date: 11/3/2015 4:48:00 PM
Such and emotional and heartfelt poem, Lin. I can't imagine the pain. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/3/2015 5:46:00 PM
I'm taking your congrats and your hugs. Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 11/3/2015 2:09:00 PM
An excellent write Lin. Congrats on your win, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:40:00 PM
I appreciate your kindness, Eve. Thanks.
Date: 11/3/2015 1:59:00 PM
Heartfelt, Lin, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:03:00 PM
Lin, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, SKAT.
Date: 11/3/2015 2:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win Lin with this sad beauty!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Upma.
Date: 10/28/2015 10:33:00 PM
What a beautiful poem.^^
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2015 4:25:00 AM
Hi, Gautam. Thank you for reading this one. I appreciate your very kind comment. ~ Lin ~
Date: 10/27/2015 10:16:00 AM
Oh, this is lovely. And anyone who has lost a loved one can relate. I look forward to reading more.
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Date: 10/27/2015 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, Brian. I hope you enjoy others. I appreciate your visit. ~ Lin ~
Date: 10/27/2015 9:18:00 AM
Sad, but so lovely in presentation of words and thought. Dreams do die, but we have to be prepared to leave the door ajar for new ones to come through...in the meantime we can still cherish memories! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much for replying to this one. ....Oh how ironic is this...I just left the same phrase to your earlier comment on 'Shadows' that you wrote me here. lol
Date: 10/26/2015 9:49:00 PM
This is truly great in its sadness and loss. Death is the greatest sadness for we that live in the loss. A7 Good luck in the contest my friend..
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Date: 10/26/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. I'm always grateful for your comments, and your rating is very kind.

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