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When Dreams Come True- 128 Words

WHEN DREAMS COME TRUE, I’ll be with you- ‘til that day’s here, I’ll crave you near. I heard you cry, and asked you why- You said you knew, you loved me too. Then why’d you go, like an ebb flow? I thought you’d stay, ‘ 'til our last day. 'Twas dusk when I, tried not to cry-, I felt the pain, my heart in chains. Like a lone doe, I’m filled with woe- Like a wolf down, I wear a frown. Ten years of love, we soared like doves- I can’t take this, I miss your kiss. You held my hand, you were my man- I was your heart, right from the start. Morn shall come soon, there’ll be no boon- No blithe for me, JUST GRIEF…you’ll see. *boon- support, favor or advantage* 128 Words Poetry Contest 128 syllables howmanysyllables.com Sponsor: Silent One January 30th, 2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:35:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Luloo - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:58:00 PM
Laura, a beautifully expressed heartbreaking write of lost love. Congratulation on your awesome win.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/6/2018 5:08:00 AM
Nicely written, Luloo, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Laura.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:38:00 PM
Very well done, Laura. Wish I had been able to do this one. Congrats on your win, sweetie.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:33:00 PM
Congrats on a fine write and win Laura!~Che :)
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Date: 2/4/2018 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Laura. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 2/4/2018 3:59:00 PM
Loss is always heartbreaking Lulloo.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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