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When discontentment grips my soul stricken with “if only” litany midst tormenting doubts attacking… …helplessly beseeching for escape flight while wallowing in failure along frustration angst --- My Lord hoists my faith, reviving my heart toward triumphant service. Cognizant of uncertainty-filled response to future upon insecurities' “maybe" flood my carnality pursues gainful personal whim making me swerve from devotion-vow retreating into convenience and comfort --- My God drives my commitment ardor in building lives, vanquishing selfishness, indeed vain. As skepticism obscures sublime vision magnifying “sometime” pleasure distracting heavenly focus… my human nature succumbs to festive dainties yet suffocating my spirit --- My Saviour through His redeeming love* reaches out to me with revival peace glow.
*2Corinthians 13:11 “… Be of good comfort, be of one mind, live in peace; and the God of love and peace shall be with you.” August 4, 2020 3rd place, "If only, maybe, sometimes" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One; judged on 8/5/2020.

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Date: 8/8/2020 2:42:00 AM
Your words shine beautifully as does your hope Beata. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/5/2020 11:40:00 AM
- The attitudes decide the actions :) - Congratulations on your win, Beata - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2020 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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