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When Did You Outgrow My Love

When did you outgrow my love? When did the fabric of my tenderness Become too tight Too fitting? When did the garment of my passion Become restrictive? When did you start to look for new coverings To clothe the nakedness of your soul? When? Tell me… When did you outgrow my love? When did you outgrow this nest? Was it when you found out that you could fly? Having been nourished, pampered and preened Your wings of self-esteem Unfurling to soar on the word wind of my praise… Was it then? When did you outgrow my love? Ah, Hush…my love, no need to speak For my heart knows the answer well I know when it all started to take place I could read your face The expression you wore As I helped you dress That look in your eyes Belied the lies That the fit was just right And so you tugged at the seams Unraveled my dreams The stitches undone My garment you tore And yet you swore Alterations wouldn't do You needed something new In the dead of night You took to flight Undressed, free For you had outgrown….. You had outgrown…. ME. Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/23/2014 12:21:00 AM
Nice sartorial descriptiveness in this write. Another good one, Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/23/2014 8:27:00 AM
:) Thanks ever so much, Robert. Glad to know that you found it up to par. :)
Date: 2/19/2014 10:00:00 PM
Been there...riveting, yet sad separation of heart & security. How could it have gone so wrong, become so unsure. Fantastic job.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/23/2014 8:30:00 AM
Who ever knows the answer to these questions, Drake. Life.....Hmmmmmmm. I guess we got to listen to Dione Warwick croon......."I know...I'll never....love this way again......so I keep holding on, before the good is gone....." Sad....SAD...S A D....Thanks for the visit, my dear.
Date: 2/19/2014 8:44:00 AM
Good morning Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2014 12:49:00 PM
:) Hello, Richard....How's it going? All is well...I know by your ANGEL poem! Beautiful Terzanelle...Hugs
Date: 2/18/2014 8:27:00 PM
well written
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thanks ever so much!
Date: 2/18/2014 12:30:00 PM
Poignant and enthralling Eileen..
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2014 12:52:00 PM
Hey, Ken...thanks for stopping by. I read your Luna poem...the latest....so beautiful and enthralling. The imagery was superb.
Date: 2/18/2014 11:08:00 AM
Eileen, this is just as stunning as always. It's been a while...still love ya...hope you are well!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2014 12:53:00 PM
;) Awwwww....shucks....you got me blushing! ;) Read your donkey basketball piece....you crack me up! ;) Love ya too!!!! Glad that hasn't changed. I'm doing ok, thanks! hugs!
Date: 2/18/2014 9:18:00 AM
A very good poem Eileen, It is nice to see a new poem from you. You write with so much emotion. That is only one of your wonderful skills. I enjoyed reading this one.....Hugs.....Roger
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2014 12:55:00 PM
Thanks, Roger. I've been on holiday...Semester break. Also...it has taken me some time to get back to writing. I don't know why...had to work hard to making a re-entrance here. Strange. Yes....most of my poems carry my heart within the lines....When Got created me...he gave me emotions in excess. ;)....thanks for stopping by.
Date: 2/18/2014 8:20:00 AM
What a triumphant return! This was worth waiting for. 777777777777 favorite!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2014 12:56:00 PM
:) Thank you, Richard......you are one of the major reasons I stick around this site....you always encourage and uplift me. What would I do without your posts? Thanks ever so much.
Date: 2/17/2014 4:26:00 PM
This is so beautifully written Eileen...Welcome back...Hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, Tim....good to be back! Thanks for reading and posting.
Date: 2/17/2014 3:52:00 PM
Wow Eileen.....powerful write and insight of why sometimes love doesn't always last. Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
Thanks, Cecilia. Good to see you again. Thanks for stopping by with such encouraging words. Hugs!
Date: 2/17/2014 3:34:00 PM
Welcome back Eileen, hope you had a great hol in sunny Cyprus.I guess women know this kind of thing, a sort of sixth sense, only they don't see dead people just dead lovers lol, I'm pleased to see you gave up on his explanations, you've probably heard it all before anyway lol. Nice to see you back and in good form. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2014 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Mr Seal....It's good to be back. I'm glad you liked this poem. Yes, women do have a keen sense when it comes to love...Unfortunately....they hold on too long. Oh well, such is life. Thanks for passing by. Appreciate your comments, as always.......

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