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When Demons Awake

When Demons Awake My soul has seen the depths of hell For I have sailed the seven seas of blood Immortality tortured beyond consciousness The tears of man begin to flood... Cataclysmic imagery within the serpent’s eyes Colossal death a warning to the wise Shunned from love and happiness Embracing sorrow with a bittersweet caress Holocaustic means that man provides Satisfying needs then subsides Demonic Destruction building the wasteland From dust to ashes nothing shall stand The demons awake from their fiery hell's With teeth of the Hydra and pernicious smells The eternities open the doors of time For a moment their rays of darkness shine But woe to thee that sleeps within With running rage and compounding sin That only Love can save your soul And thus return you demons to your hellish hole. Aug.31.2017 Your Very Best Rhyme Of All Time Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri This poem was written in my early twenties...and was the catalyst for my poetic prison lol...then I left poetry alone for some years...writing sporadically here and there...until the soup a few years ago...the rest, as they say, is history...

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Date: 9/1/2017 1:35:00 PM
yeah this kinda trancey ... kida made my gord ache ... hmm ... we still love you poet ...
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Date: 8/31/2017 8:46:00 PM
WW, 'With running rage and compounding sin'.., that is a line for the ages! I loved it! Excellently expressed even in your tender twenty-something years.., once a talent always a talent but your talent grows and grows my friend. A great write! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 8/31/2017 8:18:00 PM
Well done.. rhyme flows well.. good luck WW!
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