When Autumn Comes

Confused silence swirls around my feet,
and the anguished summer leaves,
drunk with the morning dew,
are lingering limp. 
Waiting for autumn
Preparing to crumble and mingle with earth

Somewhere beneath them
under the thunder and a tremulous sky
earth wears the scabs of old wounds

There are places that can't be forgotten...
corrupt with mourning
sprouting with questions
immersed with regret
hollowed with anger
and shadowed by trees of despair

Birch-bark faces, heads bent low, shadowed eyes
stone-cold voices, are carried in the wind, 
held captive behind disguise
Mute birds watch without a song

The leaves will decay, green goes, and the eye forgets
But can the heart forget?  Never....

How does one walk away
while pawing on the hard and bitter earth
of reason, remains impossible...?

Autumn comes
and autumn goes
I can only live in hope that baffled minds
will clearly see a winter sun
and give up blaming ... who?



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:38 AM
An excellent piece, I see why Linda honoured this one. Congrats and Mettu Christmas.
White Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 11:31 PM
I understood it's a painful poem, but nonetheless a very beautiful one. Congratulations.
Nusker Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Carrie this poem of yours is a masterpiece. Congrats! A 7
A   Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Carrie, Nice to read you again, even if it's in a poem that was almost familiar when reading it. I thank you for entering my contest with a poem that left me wanting a bit more... LOL, yes, I want more, and I am looking forward and hoping you join my new contest. Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Turner Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Mrs Carrie, my interpretation is that perhaps someone has passed (earth wears the scab of a fresh wound) and you are dealing with grief. Close?
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Stopping back with my congratulations, Carrie, for your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
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February 22, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:14 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
D. Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Carrie, Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 11:12 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda
Haight Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Wonderful, deep poem, Carrie. The cycle of seasons, and of life...very meaningful profound thoughts. A top place winner for me. 7 +Fav. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 2:22 AM
I am finding reading the poems oh so difficult yet i love your take on the theme the passing of a season - I loved the imagery - fabulous write my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:02 PM
sweet win ..........SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Carrie, I'm seeing this poem all over the place... ha ha.. it was one of the best flower poems.. interesting ending by the way... always~ Linda
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October 20, 2013 at 12:11 AM
Hello Carrie... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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October 15, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Perfection indeed…Congrats..Sara
Britt Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Greatness becomes you. Congrats!
Austin Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 10:56 AM
I agree. Age often turns a person's thoughts away from blame and reason. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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October 15, 2013 at 10:12 AM
Carrie, congrat on your wonderful first place win!! One of my favorite poems from your pen, I enjoy reading again and again. Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Congrats on the first place win the contest.carrie
Gasun Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 1:59 AM
I'm o glad to read this very beautiful and excellent poem of yours my dear friend Carrie. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 11:30 PM
congrats on this WOW poem of yours, Carrie!!!
Posey Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 8:17 PM
This could well be a classic, sweetheart. Congratulations on a beautiful entry... Well deserved win.... Jake
Adams Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 8:06 PM
stunning poem with its beautifully penned images dancing gracefully across the page...congrats on your win :)
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October 14, 2013 at 4:03 AM
Hello Carrie! I am new on this perfect site and i like your poem! Autumn is one of the most beautiful and romantic season...thanks!!! ;) RitaSolisRadius.
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