When Angels Sing

"I carry your heart with me(I carry it in my heart) I am never without it"
                                                            Quote by E.E. Cumminnings



My heart will always cry until I die
to pour from pain-filled depth within my soul
I languish in such darkness where I cry
and find a somber world of sadder toll
white doves flutter above my marble pain
where time is haunting before Angels sing
from Heaven filtered light falls through the rain
to cast a shadow from a lone dove's wing
the Angelic light pierces the dusk gray
to softly lay on her name etched in stone
the stone that's my forever yesterday
and holds all of love's memories I own
my loneliness weeps as it knows no peace
empty are the dreams I must still release

9/3/22
                     Lost to Heaven-Lover

contest-Writing challenge-In My Heart-S forms
form- Sonnet
sponsor Constance La France
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Date: 10/7/2022 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your pain. Sara
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/7/2022 4:16:00 PM
not my pain Sara, rather a poem about pain
Date: 10/7/2022 5:48:00 AM
Frederic, a beautiful Sonnet and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, your poem has so much depth and emotion, I love the music too, Constance
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/7/2022 4:17:00 PM
thank you Constance for your kindness and your contests
Date: 10/5/2022 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederick, with this beautiful heartfelt poem that touches many a heart. :)) Suzette
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/7/2022 4:18:00 PM
pain is the one thing we all can relate to on some level
Date: 10/1/2022 4:11:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Frederic. Congratulations on your win!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/7/2022 4:19:00 PM
thank you Ann
Date: 9/8/2022 12:09:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. This is an interesting title, and a great poem. I hope it gets placed. Ble8
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/7/2022 4:19:00 PM
thank you dear poet
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