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When All Stood Still

Your eyes sparkle free but mine only sparkle On Command your smile is natural beauty mine is only Made your personality Is so beautiful but not so much Your voice soft as the wind So irresistible mine rugged and captured Your eyes so peaceful So if anyone looks in them Tme and space stop its self And all would be still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/1/2009 11:16:00 AM
ahhh love. Put an "i" in "Time" :) Light & Love
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Date: 12/4/2008 1:21:00 PM
Nice concept, loved the last stanza...Raul
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