When abandon runs dry

For the Contest: Abandon
Sponsor: Constance La France
Written 20.05.2025

To live with abandon is to spend your soul as if the tab will never come, but it always does – by unknown

When abandon runs dry

He spent money with merry abandon,
Like laughter thrown into the wind.
Tossed akin to confetti in events of fleeting joy.
He kept no tabs, no ledger, 
there was no tomorrow.
He moved through life 
as a flame burns through paper.
Notes flew from his hands,
the way birds scatter startled by gunshots.
There was no guilt in his pockets.
He opened the tap and shouted the bar.
People called him legend and slapped his back,
till the wind changed and downturn came.
Then the centre of gravity shifted,
the barstools cooled,
the phones stilled,
silence frosted all the beer steins.
He found himself orbiting absence
nobody patted his shoulder, 
nobody flipped a coin in his cup, 
He had poured himself into the room,
and when the keg ran dry, 
all the lychees vanished… 
they all abandoned him.
He doesn’t speak of it now,
just nods and smiles with that tired kindness
you only learn after the last music notes.

Love you Joe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/27/2025 4:19:00 AM
Sad one. Some people do things like this in their youth, learn some lessons, straighten up and move on, but others seem to get hung up in such a life even though it is destroying them and people around them as well. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Sean Kibble
Date: 5/30/2025 2:39:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your visit - yes it is truly sad that people waste their talent and hard earned money. GBY
Date: 5/24/2025 10:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest "Abandon", Sean :) - hugs
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