When a Woman Is Just a Woman

When a woman is just a woman She is heaven and earth when she is in love She is the essence of her man’s world It’s the spirit of fire in her eye Swing of her hips Joy when she walks With romantic candlelight dinners Music and soaking in bubbles With passion Her soft skin and the sweet taste of champagne She’ll make love tenderly to last and last Her sensual kisses and caresses Awakens captivating emotions She'll give you everything she's got Just to make you smile She’s the lullaby and a hero Of her children’s hearts Skinned knees or Nights full of nightmares A mother’s soft, soothing Caress and kiss Makes it fade away She'll show she is not afraid A survivor of her own kind By: 6/1/2015
Battle of the Honorable Mentions - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux
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Y. Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your win:) Alexis
May Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 6:21 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Eve
Piper Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 12:12 AM
Romantic.
Curtis Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Hi Eve, I see you've met my wife. lol This should place well
Lamoureux Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Perfect!
Callus Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Hi Eve! You describe the woman that many would like to be a part of....sweet, romantic, seductive, loving, understanding and caring. Luckily they do exist! #7 gl in the contest. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 5:40 PM
you really did this topic justice here, Eve. WELL DONE.
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 1:33 PM
- A truely magnificent poem, dear Eve - A poem that all women must love :) - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Eve, congrats for being a beautiful woman.. i am seeing you in your lines.. =')~olive eloisa
Smith Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 11:31 PM
Fabulous Eve....you've summed up the woman in all her wonderful parts.....Tim
Leiser Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 10:54 PM
You express the glory of being a woman in the most wonderful, poetic way, Eve! Absolutely beautiful! A 7 from me :)
May Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:30 PM
You paint a beautiful picture Eve...Very sensual and romantic ...Great write...hugs
La France Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Eve, coming back to read this beautiful poem and thanks for visiting my poem, Bernard. ..
Manassian Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Lovely, Eve. A woman is all that...indeed. :) She is a wonderful creation. Good luck in the contest. This is Eileen. Hugs
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 9:51 AM
You amaze me sweet lady, I'm glad you told me this was you. You're the woman God created and so much more. Hugs dear friend
Sathasivam Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Ravi, your "Ohoo, little butterfly " is a beautiful write. Hugs Eve
Horsman Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:50 AM
wow, love this, what would we do without them? and indeed your poetry...
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Harry, your inspirational word are treasured to motivate me to keep writing :~) hugs
Hopper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:45 AM
This is beautiful!
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Anna, your kind comment is inspiring. :~) Hugs eve
La France Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 5:52 AM
Eve, this is beautiful, I love your poem and thanks for visiting my poem shameonyou
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 4:37 PM
B.W. thank you, so much for always supporting me as so many do. Bless you for it
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 1:10 AM
You have summed up the ideal woman perfectly Eve - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Jan, thank you. I wasn't going to try but I decided I would. You are very inspiring in my life
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