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When a Tree Falls

Struck down, destroyed the tree hit the ground thunder on pavement as the pavement glows red Found out ferocious is the growl in the forest, festering wound without antiseptic Held back with a palm on the chest, running the treadmill until you are released to put a fist-sized hole into the chest wall Her heart is at rest yours is beating outside your breast knuckle bones blue buried in the ashes the cranial crash healing not quite achieved, in the works when a tree falls in the forest does anyone see what truly happened Nestled in the bushy beard prayers, hope, forgiveness though we never forget and we want for heaven where a bluebird resounds in a tall and sturdy oak

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Date: 11/25/2024 2:55:00 PM
Trees are some of my favorite people. We take them for granted. I think we should have tree lawyers. This is a great poem of environmental awareness.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2024 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! Love my trees too! One lady was scoping out my trees, wanting money…no…no, move on.
Date: 11/25/2024 2:01:00 PM
I think you are making me tear up, Kim. A fav for me, too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2024 6:01:00 PM
Oh my! Thank you, Paige!
Date: 11/25/2024 12:14:00 PM
This is sad.. I can feel the angst in your words..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2024 6:03:00 PM
I appreciate you, Silent! I think you come closest to the heart of the poem. Thank you!
Date: 11/25/2024 12:03:00 PM
- It takes 80 to 120 years for a tree to be ready to be cut down... but, who cares? - I wonder where the cuckoo will bring spring this year... a lot of trees were cut down here where I live a month ago... sad that winter storage for boats is more important - Great written, Kim - hugs :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2024 6:03:00 PM
Oh that is so sad, Anne-Lise! Trees are a treasure! Hugs
Date: 11/25/2024 10:56:00 AM
So many trees were destroyed for pecuniary gain. A wonderfully written poem with great imagery and metaphors.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2024 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/24/2024 10:42:00 PM
I often wonder do these things cause a reaction somewhere around the world butterfly effect I think it's called. Hope you had a lovely thanksgiving weekend Kim, sadly we don't have it in the uk. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2024 6:03:00 AM
We do wonder…I’d say perhaps. Be thankful everyday and still Happy Holidays, Tom!
Date: 11/24/2024 12:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2024 5:09:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!

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