When a Dance Starts To Tease

Once again I'm captivated as I look into her eyes It's the way she allures me wearing just a smile Wishing, I'm wishing for my hands to soon apply Her palm raised I now know to await just a while Soon I'm drawn in again upon viewing her thighs Slowly towards me she walks, gravity now seen My mind sees our future imaging our next scene Slowly dancing naked so close but I can't reach Taunting teasing pleasing poses engross my orbs Languages of us yet there's no words of speech Caressing her undulations soon to me absorbed Soft tanned porcelain skin ripened like a peach Close to me she's now, her scents sensed, sigh My tongue secretly asps for my heart can't deny Gestured outstretched hands, shapely hips met Curvaceous lines of she addressed by my touch Upon my lap she sits, I'm hungered wanting whet Internal gears are turning amidst my driving clutch Beating hearts soon to touch, adjoining we're set Silken sheets now welcome adorned by loving two Tomorrow night it's my turn, I'll stand in front of you Dedicated to 'Olive Eloisa Guillermo' whom has my heart xx
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:18:00 PM
VERY PASSIONATE WRITE MY FRIEND. A pleasure to read to day. A7
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2015 9:47:00 AM
Hiya Robert, I've been a stranger of late. Many thanks for your lovely comment, James :)
Date: 10/14/2015 8:33:00 AM
Passionate..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate reading and finding my work worthy of the a place in the winners' list..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2015 9:14:00 AM
Many thanks Sara, and I was delighted to see you on the winners list, James :)
Date: 10/13/2015 4:46:00 PM
What a stunningly sensual write James. Loved it ~~X~~
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James Fraser
Date: 10/25/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim, so glad you enjoyed my mind in wander mode, hugs//James :) :)
Date: 10/13/2015 1:22:00 PM
A well and a sensible write.....I love how your write was beautifully conveyed...excellent one..............A.M.
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James Fraser
Date: 10/25/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thank you kindly Afolabi :) James :)
Date: 10/10/2015 2:09:00 AM
My huge one James, I'm glad you posted this one.... artistically sassy sultry steamy write...=`) but I son't dance but I can for love.... =`) love the alliterations you placed here surely you know how to excel and creatively brush the imagery... =`) you made me blush first time I read this and still you did this time... Thank you for all the poems you have written for me including this... hugs!!! Your lil one, Olive Eloisa =`)xxxx
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James Fraser
Date: 10/10/2015 7:52:00 AM
Glad you loved my mind wandering again little one. I don't write so many of these poems any more, but one every so often thinking of you, us thralls my Muse. Love you loads too, so much more soon, hugs always//your HUGE One, James ;-) xxxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2015 3:30:00 AM
Keep this in mind, i love you loads . =`)
Date: 10/9/2015 4:26:00 PM
wow, this is a HOT poem, James. Almost makes ya blush!! I bet Olive is waiting with bated breath for YOUR turn to dance!!
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Date: 10/9/2015 1:57:00 PM
wow what a beautiful sensual write James - so happy for you both my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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