When a Bag Talks

I am a bag
I was polished but now I sag
can't I be your next best friend?
though I'm not a soul that can mend
I carry your heavy load
still you don't care me for good
you put inside of me
anything you please
that sometimes I'm suffocated
and cannot breathe
from paper, clothes, and toiletries
why not bring your own house instead?
I have a favor to plead,
just once, listen to my heed
please bathe me in a soapy water
or dry cleaned to protect
my sensitive skin
then I'll be feeling fresh and new
ready to be of service, and on the go!







9.26.08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 27, 2008 at 1:11 AM
Great write. Today onwards by bag's gonna be my best friend:) Anyways I felt there are several other things we can identify the poem with...living or otherwise. Its just not about the bag...right? Loved reading it. Love Chitra
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