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When a Bag Talks

I am a bag I was polished but now I sag can't I be your next best friend? though I'm not a soul that can mend I carry your heavy load still you don't care me for good you put inside of me anything you please that sometimes I'm suffocated and cannot breathe from paper, clothes, and toiletries why not bring your own house instead? I have a favor to plead, just once, listen to my heed please bathe me in a soapy water or dry cleaned to protect my sensitive skin then I'll be feeling fresh and new ready to be of service, and on the go! 9.26.08

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Date: 9/27/2008 1:11:00 AM
Great write. Today onwards by bag's gonna be my best friend:) Anyways I felt there are several other things we can identify the poem with...living or otherwise. Its just not about the bag...right? Loved reading it. Love Chitra
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