Notes About The Poem

What's Up With Santa


He arrives at the party tonight

In his outfit of red, black, and white

Turns to skinny- not round

Pillows fall to the ground!

Ho-Ho Santa, now a Ha-Ha sight!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 1:31 PM
SO cute. One of the best saved for last. BIg congrats, dear.
May Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 6:56 AM
Lol, Mrs Claus needs to fatten him up, Congrats on your win Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Fowler Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 8:01 AM
Very cute Sandra! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Y. Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 4:21 AM
Lol! Sandra, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Merry Christmas:-) Alexis
Pappadogiannis Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 3:28 AM
Too funny Sandra! :) :) That happened to my husband too:) Congratulations on your win! Take care and have a beautiful festive season xx
Haight Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Thanks for the visit, Francesca, and for your nice comment and congrats. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Very witty Sandra, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Thank you, Jan. It was an old one, but I had fun with it. Hugs, Sandra
Devonshire Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:55 AM
So funny, Sandra! I love this limerick and laughed when I read it, even without seeing the picture because you described it so well. Congratulations on your placement. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Hugs, carolyn
Haight Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Thanks for the fun contest, Carolyn, and my fine placement. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:42 AM
That's one hilarious piece!!! :-D Congrats Sandra, for your WIN with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
Scars Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 11:52 AM
lollol! very cute Sandra :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Jerden Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Well done! I love limericks!
Haight Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Thanks for stopping by with your positive comment, Roy. I appreciate it! Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win with this funny poem. Some Santa's just don't cut it.
Haight Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Hi Brenda, thanks! Yes, some of those Santas should volunteer for something else!! Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Very witty, Sandra. He must have been my twin!....I'll never be chubby enough to make a traditional Santa! // paul
Haight Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Glad you found it amusing, Paul. Thanks, Sandra
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