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How the question Troubled me so Squinting for clarity Revealed when ready Seems clearer now In a hazy sort of way Creativity Talents to exploit Almost too late Feeling I have to rush Before crossing the finish line To earn any celestial reward Posted on April 6, 2018

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Date: 4/6/2018 8:49:00 PM
I know what you mean. So do I but you know it's not too late, Line. Carole Duet :D
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Date: 4/6/2018 9:55:00 PM
We can only do our best. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carole.
Date: 4/6/2018 5:17:00 PM
Nicely phrased verse on what must bother many of us, feeling that we are against a self-set deadline for achievement. I think you did it. And did it well. Regards, GG
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Date: 4/6/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Greg.
Date: 4/6/2018 11:02:00 AM
I can relate to this poem, Line! There is so much to be done, yet time is never on my side! Regards // paul
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:54:00 PM
O well, Paul. One day at a time like everyone else. Line xx
Date: 4/6/2018 10:51:00 AM
No need to rush Line, and your verses flow you have a great talent with words. Tom
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/6/2018 9:58:00 AM
Never too late, Line. I am going to be creating until I am 92, and so my good friend, are you!
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:55:00 PM
OK we're on ! We will encourage each other, Caren.
Date: 4/6/2018 8:32:00 AM
Your legacy of poems will live on regardless of when you cross that finish line. It's living now even in the most unsuspected of places. Great thoughts, Line.
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Reason, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 4/6/2018 8:31:00 AM
Oh, I sure know what you mean... We just don't have enough time to accomplish our desires and loves.Well said, Line. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:57:00 PM
Indeed, Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.
Date: 4/6/2018 7:52:00 AM
It is never too late and hopefully without rushing too much, all will be accomplished without regret. Well written :)
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:57:00 PM
Yes - absolutely no regrets allowed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Heidi.

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