What's My Life Mission

How the question
Troubled me so
Squinting for clarity

Revealed when ready
Seems clearer now
In a hazy sort of way

Creativity
Talents to exploit
Almost too late

Feeling I have to rush
Before crossing the finish line
To earn any celestial reward



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duet Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 8:49 PM
I know what you mean. So do I but you know it's not too late, Line. Carole Duet :D
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:55 PM
We can only do our best. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carole.
Gaul Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 5:17 PM
Nicely phrased verse on what must bother many of us, feeling that we are against a self-set deadline for achievement. I think you did it. And did it well. Regards, GG
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:56 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Greg.
Callus Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 11:02 AM
I can relate to this poem, Line! There is so much to be done, yet time is never on my side! Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM
O well, Paul. One day at a time like everyone else. Line xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:51 AM
No need to rush Line, and your verses flow you have a great talent with words. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Never too late, Line. I am going to be creating until I am 92, and so my good friend, are you!
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:55 PM
OK we're on ! We will encourage each other, Caren.
Poteet Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Your legacy of poems will live on regardless of when you cross that finish line. It's living now even in the most unsuspected of places. Great thoughts, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Thank you so much, Reason, for your lovely visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Oh, I sure know what you mean... We just don't have enough time to accomplish our desires and loves.Well said, Line. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Indeed, Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.
Sands Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 7:52 AM
It is never too late and hopefully without rushing too much, all will be accomplished without regret. Well written :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Yes - absolutely no regrets allowed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Heidi.
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