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Whatcha Thinkin 'Bout

whatcha thinkin ’bout nothing really. it is true. at an age when the mind is on permanent vacation, I float on a bed of soft feeling, selected memories. occasionally a thought creeps in disguised as a smallish notion then bursts into a real head-banger of an idea stamped, to the one who used to live here. Like throwing a bone to a toothless dog to be slobbered over then discarded for a nap in the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 9:03:00 AM
I'm having a strong urge to print this and post it on a wall in my man-cave. Permission requested please. (Will share space with Kurt Vonnegut) Thanks for sharing your poetry. ~ john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/26/2017 9:21:00 AM
Oh my of course! Kurt Vonnegut is estimable company. Then I could tell everyone that Kurt (first name bases already) and I hang out together.
Date: 8/19/2017 10:33:00 AM
Am I supposed to enjoy this write as much as I do? ;)
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