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What You Owe

Two wrongs never make a right But somehow you are going to pay for how treated me last night I have been through the high waters from the pits below Long nights drenched in tears is what you owe A sickening feeling inside my stomach and a dull pain in the small of my back Now is the time for you to pay for all things you have always lacked The sun is shining brightly outside but on the inside you hurt This is how I felt when you made me feel like dirt A man shows no emotions but that has been proved to be a lie You poor thing...It was certainly my intentions to make you cry I have been through the high waters conjured from the pits below Cried out eyes and a sad face is what you owe I guess it doesn’t feel good knowing that your heart aches I’ve become immune to the pain because I suffered so many heart breaks The pain of being mistreated by the one you love feels like being stabbed straight through the soul There you are left with a mess to clean up and a heart inflicted with a hole Curling into the fetal position doesn’t help to ease the pain Once you get the hurt out of your heart you have to try to get it out of your brain Damaged thoughts and broken relationships with the demons haunting you from below Defeat never victory or the success of a happy relationship is what you owe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/7/2010 6:53:00 AM
I really do hope you have more of your in-depth writing for us. I enjoy your writes although I feel your pain. Search for healing my dear. Let go of what's not worth your while. All the best. Joy
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Date: 9/7/2010 5:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Monica. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderfully encouraging comment on my poem. I too believe in and appreciate honest feedback..how else can we grow as poets?...this is incredibly well expressed the anger you feel is as tangible as a slap in the face! A very powerful and potently penned piece! in poetry Dory
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Date: 9/5/2010 3:56:00 AM
Enjoyed this write, emotions emitting line after line. Well constructed and I guess whatt goes around comes around.
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Date: 9/4/2010 9:12:00 AM
oops it's karma ;!
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Date: 9/4/2010 9:10:00 AM
nice write, and it's carma it always comes around, keep on writing on
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:35:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... soup offers many contests on site..check them out and enter.. and good luck.. safe and happy holiday weekend..with luv..
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